personal essay 1 draft

I tried posting my draft up here but i keep getting error messages about the html. maybe during out conference you can help me. and as for our confence- the things i wish the reader to take away from my story are a better understanding of graffiti, and why people do it and what its like to get inside the mind of a graffiti artist first hand while he's doing it. And also just one wicked, entertaining story from a crazy time in my life, that if it had no better purpose, i at least got good stories out of. and as for the feedback i would like from you maybe just what you thought of my story, and some help with the structure because i kno i tend to digress and be unorganized when i write. and thats all i can really think of. any thoughts, feed back, and constructive criticism would help, just keep in mind that it was only a 1st draft so please dont be too harsh : )